Home Task 6: If I...

[stepan]

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Task: Complete the sentences below with your own ideas using will or would.
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1. If I learn to speak English well, I will can speak without any pauses.
2. If I could live anywhere in the world, I'd live everywhere.
3. If I have time this week, I'll sleep a bit more than usually.
4. If I could change places with a celebrity, I wouldn't use this great chance to change my life by such way.
5. If I go out tonight, I'll try to see off the sunset and to meet the moon rise.
6. If I were invisible, I would keep on eye on different people.
7. If I'm up early tomorrow, I will have a chance to have time to do my business.
8. If I could live my life again, I would thank the Universe for such incredible experience.
9. If I live to be eighty years old, it will mean that the humanity will survive by 2050.
10. If I were the richest person in the world, I would realize the most of my material dreams and would affect all the world more distinctly.

Comments

[juan-gandhi.livejournal.com]

4 by such way -> in such a way
5 see off -> see
6 different -> various

[stepan.livejournal.com]

Thanks!

[cheshire-kittn.livejournal.com]

will can - нет такой формы
I will speak / I will be able to speak
keep on eye => keep AN eye (опечатка наверное, но все же)

[stepan.livejournal.com]

Thanks!
will can чувствовал, что коряво, но не смог придумать замену =)

[kosolapaya.livejournal.com]

(1) "I will speak without..."
(3) "a bit more then usual." or " a bit more then I usually do"
(5) "to meet the moon rise" is a bit strange. I would just leave "to see sunset and then the moon rising" or something along those lines.
(6) "an eye on"
(7) "to do my business" is yet again strange. "to do my chores" or "to finish my business", maybe?
(10) I don't think that "all the world" is appropriate. "and would affect the world"? Or better yet, just stop after the material dreams.:)

plus what your dad said.:)

[stepan.livejournal.com]

Thanks!