HT 2: Ideal day
Jun. 4th, 2008 02:05 am![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
stepanIdeal day - is a state when I realize any of my thoughts and wishes just at the moment they come.
For example, I with 12 loved and loving experienced women relax in a big jacuzzi and a pool with transparent bottom on the huge flying safe home which can teleport to any point of the Universe.There are also my family with wives and children with my friends. We are fly on air-boards, travel to distant points of the Universe and to parallel ones too.
It's a state when I receive a true answer on any question I ask. For example, how to be happy or what that person or any other object want, feel and think about?
I know all about the future, past and present moments. And I'm happy. I disappear in the Absolute, I'm God... We with Nature are single whole. And there are no any wars and crimes in the Whole World. All the World becomes Love. Every person is happy and peaceful.
Yes, it's the Paradise.
I'm dissolve in the Eternity.
Bye.
For example, I with 12 loved and loving experienced women relax in a big jacuzzi and a pool with transparent bottom on the huge flying safe home which can teleport to any point of the Universe.There are also my family with wives and children with my friends. We are fly on air-boards, travel to distant points of the Universe and to parallel ones too.
It's a state when I receive a true answer on any question I ask. For example, how to be happy or what that person or any other object want, feel and think about?
I know all about the future, past and present moments. And I'm happy. I disappear in the Absolute, I'm God... We with Nature are single whole. And there are no any wars and crimes in the Whole World. All the World becomes Love. Every person is happy and peaceful.
Yes, it's the Paradise.
I'm dissolve in the Eternity.
Bye.
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An ideal day
Date: 2008-06-18 11:02 pm (UTC)Ideal day -*(или тире или "is" здесь лишние) is a state*(state of mind or?..) when I realize*(это слово значит "понимать", а не "реализовывать". Они говорят "to come true") any of my thoughts and wishes just at the moment they come.
For example, I*("me" было бы грамотнее) with*(стилистически лучше "and") 12 loved and loving experienced women relax in a big jacuzzi and a pool with transparent bottom on the huge flying safe home which can teleport to any point of the Universe.There are also my family with wives and children with*(может "of"?) my friends. We are fly*(если are, так уж flying)on air-boards, travel to distant points of the Universe and to parallel ones too.
It's a state when I receive a true answer on any question I ask. For example, how to be happy or what that person or any other object want, feel and think about?
I know all about the future, past and present moments. And I'm happy. I disappear in the Absolute, I'm God... We with Nature are single whole*(если есть оборот "single whole", то поправь меня). And there are no any wars and crimes in the Whole World. All the World becomes Love. Every person is happy and peaceful.
Yes, it's the Paradise.
I'm dissolve*(ing) in the Eternity.
Bye.
Re: An ideal day
Date: 2008-06-19 12:40 pm (UTC)Ты предлагаешь, чтобы это были дети и жёны моих друзей. Однако я предполагал, что это мои жёны, мои дети, и мои друзья =)
>We with Nature are single whole*(если есть оборот "single whole", то поправь меня).
Не очень понял в чём именно тебя надо поправить, но это выражение я взял ил Лингво: "единое целое - a single whole".
А в остальном спасибо. Я чего-то разогнался когда фантазировал и даже при проверке не увидел временных несогласований, которые мог бы заметить =)